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Living a life of despair
Hpe and happiness have come too late.
Why me? It's just unfair,
Death approaches as i wait.

Within the darkness, a home so warm
Where i sit, watching myslef bleed.
A lovely place away from harm
Except this death serpent, upon me it feeds.

No matter how hard i try i can't keep sane,
Along this despairing road, named sadness lane.
Not vent art! I repeat, not vent art!
Im just taking advantage of my depression and making poetry that speaks my soul when im down
What do you guys think of my poetry so far?
Oh, btw i also incorporated one of my charcters in this poem. She's not on Da so dont think you can find her in my pictures but yeah, theres a hint of what she is in this poem
Made this during english class when i was supposed to be writing an essay about a poem XD

Poem (c) me
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:iconviet-anh-the-taurus:
Viet-Anh-the-Taurus Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(Sorry for the late comment)

You're WAAAAAY better than me in writing poems ! X3
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:iconomegawolfalpha:
OmegaWOLFAlpha Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Late comment is okay X3

Nah, i dont think so, i think everyone's a better writer than me, i suck at writing XD
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:iconviet-anh-the-taurus:
Viet-Anh-the-Taurus Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your writings are really good, at least to me :)
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:iconomegawolfalpha:
OmegaWOLFAlpha Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Really!? Thanks ^^
Actually theres an interesting story behind my writings
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ishifishy Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
o3ob (late,I kno)
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:iconomegawolfalpha:
OmegaWOLFAlpha Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Very late X3
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:iconishifishy:
ishifishy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and now even more late xD
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KimberlyAnn16 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg this is awesome! x3
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:iconomegawolfalpha:
OmegaWOLFAlpha Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks sis ^w^
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:iconkimberlyann16:
KimberlyAnn16 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome bub. :3
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